Score: 7

"Good!"

submission: Sorry Tom?

date: April 13, 2008

A good flash! Decent animation all together. Decent graphics and style, I enjoyed your way of animating. This made me laugh, due to the constant Clock Crew shenanigans. I wish it was longer, and actually had a conclusion. Great job, keep up the good work!

Score: 5

"Kept me entertained..."

submission: Flash Mysteries: Ep. 1

date: April 13, 2008

This was an interesting flash. Although there wasn't much animation, it still was a good watch. I enjoy anything related to paranormal things. This could have been longer, and maybe more intricate backgrounds on the menu, and during the clips. Altogether, it was an okay flash. Keep it up!

Score: 8

"Has potential!"

submission: Just Another Weekend 4

date: April 10, 2008

This flash could be much more successful. Try to get some voice actors, ones who speak English preferably. All of your characters seemed to have the same voice. The animation was well done, and I thought it was pretty original. The art could have been better, although it wasn't too bad. You did an overall good job, keep up the good work!

Score: 10

"Spectacular!"

submission: Underneath

date: April 10, 2008

Not only did this movie provide the great artwork needed to be successful on NewGrounds, but also the magnificent cinematic direction. This very 'artsy' flash was well executed, and had a meaningful sort of noir-ish feel to it. I enjoyed it very much! I also thought you had a great choice of music, I liked the song as well! You get my five for this, I loved it.

Score: 6

"Hm..."

submission: Toasters and Bathtubs

date: April 10, 2008

Decently done, but has MUCH room for improvement. The art was far from good, although the animation was decent. I feel you overdid your tweens at some points. Working on your easing, you seem to overload it, it seems to give the animation less of a realistic physics feel. The joke was okay, it didn't get me laughing out loud, but was still alright. Not a bad flash, but not a good one either. I feel it doesn't deserve the score it got, sorry.

Score: 9

"Deserves a better score!"

submission: Heather

date: April 5, 2008

I loved this! It was obvious how much effort was put into this. I love your artwork, and I've always been a bit of a fan of yours. Your style is great, and your frame-by-frame is awesome! I just dislike the exclusion of a background, and the odd bleakness of the animations. I seem to dislike animations with no sound, or in your case, just a song in the background. Although it had very slight minor faults, I still believe you deserve a five! Great job!

Score: 3

"Lacking..."

submission: Toxic Man

date: April 5, 2008

This could have been much better. You severely need to work on your writing. This flash bored me, and was not entertaining. You need to make your animation more fluent, bright, and exuberant. Your graphics lacked style, you need to actually draw your own characters, not just loosely trace bitmaps. The length was extremely bad, you need much more effort! Try harder before submitting again. Don't give up!

Score: 7

"Decent..."

submission: The Duane Garcia Moment

date: April 5, 2008

An overall decent flash. I didn't see a great amount of effort put into this. There was absolutely no lip syncing, which is obviously a minus. The white outline on some of the drawings was quite unnecessary. The voice acting was ATROCIOUS and very annoying. Although, I did enjoy the artwork, nice job! I didn't quite find this too funny, so I can't say I enjoyed it. A decent animation, good job.

Score: 4

"Not so good..."

submission: The stick boot collab

date: April 5, 2008

This collaboration could have been much better. The idea was terrible, and the way it was executed wasn't quite up-to-par. This flash's animation was lacking, badly. The backgrounds in all of these animations were painfully bad. All of the frame-by-frame was horrible, as if it were done by mere beginners of flash. If you go to the portal page at any given time, you'll see a 'my first flash' animation, and it will resemble many of the clips in this animation. Much, much more effort could have been put into this animation. Below average, at best.

Score: 6

"Average..."

submission: Stick Showdown Collab²

date: April 5, 2008

The animation in this collab overall was mediocre at best. Not the greatest animation at all. Much of this was just the everyday stick fight you can see in the portal 24/7. Although I enjoyed Jinkii Cman's parts, the other's weren't so great. The frame-by-frame was weak, and the filters were used out of place. I can't say I enjoyed watching this. Stick figures are outdated, and not-so-entertaining. An average flash.